Successful sports professionals can earn a lot of more money than people in other important professions. Some people think that this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, in the professional sports games a lot of sportsmen earn a huge
salary
or get expensive gifts from sponsors. Use synonyms
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, while some people believe that paying a huge Linking Words
money
to athletes is increasing Use synonyms
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authority and present Use synonyms
country
power in the world, I strongly agree with those who think these Use synonyms
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money
need spend poor people and increase Suggestion
monies
moneys
salary
teachers, doctors.
On the one hand, it could argue that paying huge fees to sportsmen who present Use synonyms
country
in the Olympic games have been motivated them to achieve a Use synonyms
highest
result in the competition time. Suggestion
higher
First
and foremost, these results show the real Linking Words
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country
the world level and some people think is enemy starting afraid of them, so will not attack them in the future. Without these sport competitions, we would not be able to show them our power. Suggestion
the country
countries
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such
as Olympus or the World championship. Linking Words
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government
and sponsors have to compensate them in their efforts.
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However
, I side with those who think that paying a huge Linking Words
salary
to the sportsmen does not make any sense as Use synonyms
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government
has concentrated more for improving to the social status of poor people. Unfortunately, in the world a large amount of people who need to be aided in buy food or clothes and a number of these people grow every day. In fact, Suggestion
the government
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government
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the government
give
expensive gifts or Suggestion
gives
money
to the Olympic sportsmen which spends Use synonyms
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money
to luxury life. Use synonyms
Furthermore
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government
has to spend Use synonyms
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money
to the social sectors Use synonyms
such
as increase Linking Words
salary
of teachers and doctors. These professions give more benefit to our society than athletes in the Olympic game. Without these people working whole their lives, we will not be able to treat illness or educate children in the schools and universities.
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although
sportsmen present our Linking Words
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in the famous sports games, Use synonyms
government
needs to concentrate more to social sectors and support poor people. Use synonyms
Therefore
, on balance, I believe support people who educate us or treat illness more important than sportsmen.Linking Words
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