In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

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When it comes to tourist destinations, people’s preferences are changing, and soon there will be more tourists who will choose to visit their country

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of other countries.

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is because after the current pandemic, people will be poorer, so the purchasing power will decrease dramatically.

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, individuals will not have enough time to organize a long trip since there will be more necessary to work than right now. As a consequence of the COVID-19 pandemic, the unemployment rate has been steadily increasing and has been spreading around the world like the (same) virus.

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is because measures

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as the lockdown have boosted the closure of a massive number of shops, and many citizens have lost their jobs. According to economic analysts/experts in economics, poverty will be higher in the near future, purchasing power will far lower, and people will not be able to afford expensive holidays.

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, people will spend their salary on essential products and services, and vacation will be a luxury.

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, the lifestyle will change in the coming years, and people will have to work longer hours in much longer hours.

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, employees will not have many vacation days available.

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, they will have to choose closer places to visit and in

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way, make better use of the rest time.

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, these changes will have some positive aspects,

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as getting to know the country where one lives better. In conclusion, in the future, people will select local destinations

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of international places because people/we will not afford expensive travels; neither will we have enough time for a long trip.

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unfortunate scenario will be a consequence of the current pandemic that we are experiencing and I strongly agree with

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prediction.

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Topic Vocabulary:

domestic tourism
international travel
cultural exchange
national pride
affordability
convenience
ecotourism
heritage sites
local businesses
comfort zone

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