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Some people think that it is good to raise children in a city. Others argue that it is better for children to grow up in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, people prefer to raise their children in a city. There are many people who think that people
should upbring
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should bring up
should up bring
 their children in a city
,
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,
 while
other
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others
 believe that people should raise their children in rural areas.In
this
eassy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
issue
 I will discuss both sides of the arguments and my viewpoints on
this
 will be elaborated in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, in
cities people
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cities, people
enjoy
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enjoys
 more facilities rather than rural areas. Children should be given chance in cities for getting
education
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an education
 because in cities school
provide
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provides
 more advanced and technology based information and they
also
 take care of co- curricular activities which are essential for overall growth and development of
child’s personality
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the child’s personality
a child’s personality
.
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.
Moreover
,
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,
 In
this
 highly competitive
world it
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world, it
 is really essential for people to make their children efficient in every walk of life so cities are better for their upbringing.
On the other hand
, some people have contradictory viewpoints they believe that rural areas are better because these areas are less polluted as compared to cities which is good for the health of children.
Secondly
,
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,
 children should get
education
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an education
 from rural areas because they will automatically get connected to nature and they can will take interest in development of nature. To recapitulate, I would like to write that both city life and countryside have its advantages as well as disadvantages.
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