The media should include more stories which report good news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There is a view that news coverage on media should focus more on good news. In my opinion, that statement is true because of
numerous advantages
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the numerous advantages
that good news can offer. The
first
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benefit of good news is that it can convey meaningful life messages.
For example
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, Truc Nhi and Dieu Nhi - conjoined twins
(
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(
a
scarced
dried out by heat or excessive exposure to sunlight
scorched
circumstance in medical history not only in Viet Nam but
also
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over around the world) were
sucessfully
with success; in a successful manner
successfully
separated into two independent
individual
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individuals
after a miracle surgery lasting for about twelve hours, and those
magic
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magical
story
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stories
was reported
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were reported
through social media. People are extremely admirable and acclaim the vigour of the twins and the competency of doctors, and they call those as heroes. The story of two bravery children has
inspried
being of such surpassing excellence as to suggest inspiration by the gods
inspired
for a number of people who have struggled with vulnerable diseases, encouraged them to have optimistic views about their lives and miracle will come to them. Another significant advantage of positive story is that it can attribute to
sense
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a sense
of well-being.
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is because people tend to have positive attitudes when they expose to good news.
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, you wake up every morning and your routine begins with a cup of coffee and reading a feel-good article through your phone which facilitate you have full of
engergy
(physics) a thermodynamic quantity equivalent to the capacity of a physical system to do work; the units of energy are joules or ergs
energy
and
enthusiam
a feeling of excitement
enthusiasm
for a new working day.
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, good mood is a crucial factor leading to work
efficiency
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efficiently
as well as life satisfaction.
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, reading negative news can cause anxiety, pessimistic thinking and even bad effect on your mental health because of images of war, disaster and crisis. In conclusion, I completely agree that positive information should be covered
virally
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through mainstream media due to two main benefits of good news which are meaningful messages and
sense
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a sense
of happiness.
Submitted by Andy on

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