In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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the 21st century, many people are nowadays expressing a growing concern about the main source of the national economy. In fact, there are some people who hold firmly to their belief that the major economic profit of numerous countries come from international travel. While I accept that

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has both benefits and drawbacks, I would

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that there are more advantages than disadvantages.

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with, there are serious drawbacks when international tourism is considered as the important source of local's income.

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of all, it is a well known the fact that the cost of living would be increased. The most obvious example to prove is that prices of goods and services often

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on the tourist seasons because of the

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visitors'

demand.

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, there is no doubt that the local government

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has

to spend a bunch of money to clean the environment.

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, the cleaning up waste on the Mount Everest campaign in 2019 costs a much of money.

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, I believe that there are serious benefits which outweigh

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these drawbacks

this drawback

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and foremost, it is commonly accepted that tourism industry creates more employment opportunities which improve the local

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peoples

income.

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, students who live

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travel places could work part time jobs in their leisure time.

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Moreover, there

is no denying the fact that foreign visitor

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brings

a huge of revenue to the national budgets. An example being to support is that people have to pay a lot of money to get permit entry to aboard countries. In conclusion, it is my strong belief that international tourism brings more advantages for the country funds.

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, I highly recommend that the local government should

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move while supporting, either in a vehicle or in one's hands or on one's body

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out the travel industry.