most countries fast food is becoming cheaper and more available. Do you think the advantage of this development outweigh the disadvantage?

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Fast
food
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is supposed to be sold at a lower price and more popular in many countries Some people assume that it is a negative tendency in spite of the contrary opinion. I personally believe that the drawbacks of junk
food
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far outweigh its benefits.
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, the lower price of fast
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and its increasing popularity are beneficial not only individuals but
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the local authorities. When
this
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kind of junk
food
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has been sold at the corner of every
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
, it can be more accessible to citizens including low-paid workforce.
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, they not only can save more money to purchase
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but
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time for moving and preparing for daily meals. Apart from individuals, the local authorities can be
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benefited
benefitted
from it in terms of economical effectiveness. When fast
food
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is increasingly consumed, these franchises
has made
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have made
a great economic contribution to the local via taxes and jobs.
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, there is
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a negative impact due to the affordability and popularity of fast
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. The
first
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impact is due to the fact that fast
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, typically fried chicken, hamburgers and pizzas has caused a range variety of health problems to its consumers
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as obesity and diabetes. The reason for
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is that
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unhealthy
food
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is full of high fat and chemical ingredients, but lack of healthy proportions like vegetables.
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, many countries
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as the USA and China are facing to epidemic proportions of fat children who
cannot control of
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cannot control
their weight and
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unhealthy eating habit.
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, due to its convenience, family
spend
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spends
more
dinners eating
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dinners, eating
out at fast
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food’s
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food
restaurants. They rarely have a cosy dinner time; together cooking and preparing nutritious dishes in a warm atmosphere; leading to less family connection than ever before. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
aspects of drawbacks in comparison with their rising affordability and availability of fast
food
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for the justifications illustrated above.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • affordability
  • culinary diversity
  • entry-level positions
  • food deserts
  • health concerns
  • economic benefits
  • environmental impact
  • cultural dilution
  • global accessibility
  • convenience
  • homogenization
  • waste production
  • deforestation
  • agricultural needs
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
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