Some people say that the only reason for learning a new foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Although
languages are the main means of communication among people
, learning a foreign language
and speaking other languages besides
the mother tongue has a variety of different reasons, such
as entertainment and work. This
argument, the importance of being bilingual only for working or living in another country, is both supported and refuted by many. This
essay will analyse both sides of the argument before declaring a position.
On one hand, many people
believe that learning and speaking other languages for other reasons is also
worthwhile. Take people
who are under the influence of the Korean wave, culture and language
, as an example. Most of them learn Korean, although
they know, they would never live in South Korea, and they learn this
language
only for entertainment. Not only is not it a waste of time, but also
helps them to prevent Alzheimer's disease, which is proved by American scientists. Thus
, it makes it clear, how learning a language
can be helpful for our health, while
we learn it only for entertaining.
On the other hand
, other people
are of the opinion that learning a new language
is only reasonable for working in and travelling to other countries. For instance
, some English speakers believe that they do not need to learn a new language
, since their language
is enough to get a well-paid job, as a consequence
of being an international language
. Therefore
, it seems reasonable for this
group of people
to argue that learning a new language
is sensible only for working and travelling somewhere.
In summary, there has always been a debate between the two sides of this
argument regarding the reasonable reason for learning a foreign language
for only work and travel or other reasons. Personally, I believe, we should consider all the aspects and benefits of learning a language
and consider all the factors.Submitted by axel00lee on
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coherence cohesion
Consider providing a clearer and more direct thesis statement to outline your position in the introduction. This will help readers understand your stance from the beginning.
task achievement
Expand on the examples given. For instance, mention more specific benefits of learning Korean for entertainment or further explain why English speakers might feel they don't need to learn another language.
coherence cohesion
In the conclusion, restate your main points more explicitly and directly connect them to your final opinion. This will leave a stronger impression of your argument.
coherence cohesion
The essay provides a balanced discussion, covering both sides of the argument effectively.
task achievement
Relevant examples are given to support the main points, such as the influence of the Korean wave and the status of English as an international language.
coherence cohesion
The essay maintains a formal tone and uses appropriate language throughout.
Your opinion
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