The widespread use of the internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web? What solutions can you suggest?

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

widespread use
main problems
associated with
cybercrime
hacking
privacy
data security
cyberbullying
online harassment
addiction
excessive screen time
misinformation
fake news
online scams
fraud
loss of productivity
impersonal communication
social isolation
digital divide
solutions
suggest

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