The widespread use of the internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web? What solutions can you suggest?

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problems
relative the
use
of the web, before proposing two possible
solution
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solutions
. Perhaps the most important cause of widespread
use
of
internet
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the internet
is the lack of
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interpersonal interaction
interaction interpersonal
integration interpersonal
.
As a result
, people are focused on social media and they
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people in general
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the trip
. Another key factor is what people are
position
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positioned
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in
of
their social media, which is not
necessarly
in such a manner as could not be otherwise
necessarily
wrong or right but it could arouse disagreement online.
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means
that nows day people are
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judged
more and being more
aggressive especially
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aggressive, especially
when there are hiding on
internet
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. Fortunately,
however
, there are two promising solution to
this
problem.
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of all, I recommend the management of how
many
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much
time
is spending
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is spent
online. I as
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an
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an item of information that is typical of a class or group
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, I do not
use
my mobile phone during the dinner
time
and I avoid how much as I can the
use
of
internet
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at what time? "When are you coming home?"
when
I am with my friends or family.
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, before posting anything the person should think about if it is aggressive or if could cause a problem for divergent
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use
of
internet
brought a variety issues which
is primarily caused
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are primarily caused
by lack of interpersonal
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mutual dealings or connections or communications among persons or groups
relations
, along with online disagreement and judgment. I suggest that people
addres
the place where a person or organization can be found or communicated with
address
addressed
addresses
this
issue by spending less
time
on the
internet
, and be open to see
diferents
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
ways to think about
same topic
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the same topic
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • widespread use
  • main problems
  • associated with
  • cybercrime
  • hacking
  • privacy
  • data security
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • addiction
  • excessive screen time
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • online scams
  • fraud
  • loss of productivity
  • impersonal communication
  • social isolation
  • digital divide
  • solutions
  • suggest
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