Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that now we can watch movies on gadgets we do not need to attend
theatre. Some think that to be really liked movies must be seen in a
theatre. In
essay I will discuss both these views and give my opinion. To see the films on our tablets and phones, there is no need to go to the
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
. On my tablet I see every
I want to see.
way is cheap. Each month I pay $9 and I watch many films in my home or on the train. If something happens, I can stop and do it and later I can watch my
again. I like
I fully enjoy it as my stress is not there.
In addition
, I like to go the
theatre. I like my friends and me to meet up and go to
movie house
the movie house
a movie house
movie houses
and if I see my boyfriend, I like to go to
a film
the film
to see a
year on my birthday many friends an me all went to drive-in together and we watched Deep Water Horizon. I enjoyed
and my friends too, because the big screen showed more information and because the sound quality was better than at home. May be in my house we will not be so happy to watch
and see the famous actor.
, we enjoyed the popcorn and coke we could buy. In conclusion, in my house I like to watch films on my tablet. It is cheap and easy for me, but I
like to go to the cinema to see films, especially with friends. Maybe both are good to fully enjoy films at different times and with different people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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