You stayed over at a friend’s house last weekend and think that you left your watch there. In your letter: Thank your friend Describe your watch Tell them what you want them to do
Dear Joey,
First,
I am so overwhelmed after being a part of your birthday party last
week, and sleeping in the tent and playing cards the whole night was unforgettable for me. I owe you a big thank you for everything. As usual, I was in a rush for my flight, I forgot to wear my watch. It is a black strap digital watch by Titan company and has white radium crystal in it.
That watch is very precious to me and you know I like to wear it on every special occasion. Hence
, one of my colleagues is from your area and he is coming to attend a meeting in my branch. If you can reach the bus station on William Street this
evening at 6 pm, he will collect it from you.
Once again, I am much obliged for a wonderful stay at your place.
Your loving friend,
HarrySubmitted by Mrjit147 on
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Task Achievement
Overall, your letter is well-written and effectively conveys the necessary information. However, it would be even better if you provided a bit more detail about the watch, such as its face or any distinctive features.
Coherence and Cohesion
Your letter is coherent and logically structured. Each paragraph introduces a new topic, contributing to the overall clarity. For an even higher score, consider starting your letter with a short introductory sentence that sets the tone for the gratitude and further context.
Suitable Writing Tone
Your use of a friendly and polite tone is very effective, capturing the essence of a personal letter to a friend.
Logical Structure
The logical flow from thanking Joey, describing the watch, and suggesting a solution is clear and well-organized.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,