You are working for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should: * describe why you want to take the course * explaining how it will be beneficial to the company * tell who will be managing your work in your absence.

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Dear sir/madam, I am writing to inform you that I watched the news on television about the Cashier Management Training

Course

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on 21st October. Basically, the main reason to attend it is developing customer satisfaction as well as boost sales. It’s five days

course

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, which will be held

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1st September to 5th September at Park view hotel, Vancouver.

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, the registration fee is only $200 plus meals and accommodation free. I believe that it would be helpful for me, and our 7 Eleven company

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of all, it helps me enhance my management skills, which are necessary for me to become an assistant manager. As you know, we have only one

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associate manager at a store, if he is sick

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we are in trouble.

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this

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will be vital to promote products widely, because each month we have already lost many customers, due to the worst customer services.

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knowledge about how we can up selling beverages, chocolates, smokes, and so on.

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it is hard for you to manage the store,

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confident other employees will handle it accurate manner. I would appreciate it if you could consider my proposition. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Gurjeet

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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