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These days everyone seems to have more possessions(e.g. computers, cars, mobile phones, etc) Our strong desire to own these things is making us less aware of important personal qualities such as kindness and concern for others. Do you agree or disagree?

#possessions #e #g #computers #cars #phones #desire #qualities #kindness #concern
Materialism has many
drawback
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drawbacks
 that affect
values
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the values
 of our community
in contrast
 with our social contract. In the recent years,
this
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
create
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creates
 a nagging attitude towards our life style. Unfortunately, it's an indiscriminately race of obtaining, doesn’t matter where it comes from
.
Accept space
.
However
, some personal characteristics,
such
 as tenderness, care
to
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for
of
 each other are lost day by day. As I strongly belief
on
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in
 inter-human relationship, I agree with the claim above. Living in the globalization era, we have established many beliefs that dictate
us every
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us, every
 human being must be valued and appreciated in accordance to amount of money that he earned.
As a result
 of
this
 attitude, most
person
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people
persons
 destroy the social fabric and passionate
to
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in
 getting more and more. They forget their original
well-being nature
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well-being, nature
 and moral values.
Furthermore
, I have an impression that in the past family members gathered after a working day to share with their views about their daily routine work or life, so proper communication within the family is constructed strong and warm connection of feelings. Currently, mostly people
make
engage in
do
 plan
to
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for
 going for outing or fly to some exotic island to show off their latest bought luxury stuff
.
Accept space
.
Therefore
, they are lack of real
meet-ups
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meetups
,
Accept space
,
which is the key factor and bonding element that
lead people love
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lead people to love
 each other and maintain kind
inter-relation
mutual or reciprocal relation or relatedness
interrelation
interrelations
.
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Taking
 everything into consideration, I admit people today are surrounded with their items considering
theme
objective case of they
them
 as a sign of better status. But, each of them is making himself isolated in their own circle and cut off from society.
Nevertheless
,
I
of me or myself
my
 belief that we should not replace real human qualities with stock things. These things
doesn’t relate
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don’t relate
are not related
 any alternative of well-wisher and generous nature
for
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of
 other needy peoples.
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