Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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In general, people say the
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at all levels are too centric towards the learning facts, which means a theoretical approach rather than practical skills. In a country like India current
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drives the theoretical approach in all the levels of the stream. Right from kindergarten to universities. The syllabus was designed in
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a way that students will focus majorly on
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classes. These
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classes were evaluated through a term test followed by a ranking
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, current
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focus on major subjects like science, mathematics and languages. The current method of learning missed to focus on life skills and practical sessions. To some extent I agree that practical sessions were used, but only on the higher school grades and in universities, even that's too insignificant. Psychologically practical methods are more impactful than
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, but if the concept would have been taught in a practical way, students will not forget forever.
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was proven scientifically. Current infrastructure may not be supportive to be practiced in many of times. But technology has a solution for
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issue. Web based applications like Google, YouTube are very popular nowadays. Teachers shall use those platforms and help the students to explain the concepts in a practical way. Once my son came to me and ask for a help to create an electrical circuit project, I have directed him to learn from the YouTube,
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he was resistive later he enjoyed the learning and
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process gave him a satisfaction of achievement. In conclusion, I strongly agree that the current
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doesn't support enough on the practical side of the learning. It would be better if the method of teaching and evaluation should shift towards the practical side which will give more balanced
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rote memorization
  • practical skills
  • adaptable skills
  • critical thinking
  • balanced approach
  • problem-solving
  • decision-making
  • workforce readiness
  • real-life challenges
  • technological advancements
  • information management
  • creativity hindrance
  • lifelong learning
  • skill development
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