Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argued that it is better to try and improve the situation. Discuss both view and give you own opinion.
It is true that struggling and accepting a negative circumstance is a difficult decision for many individuals. While it can be argued that it is necessary to give another chance as it could be better in certain aspects, I believe that acknowledging the reality can bring substantial advantages.
There are several reasons why giving a
second
chance and seeking for a possible solution are possible ideas to deal with many issues. Linking Words
To begin
with, there are numerous cases where a failure person can turn a negative situation, which is their weakness, to personal strength. Linking Words
For example
, Nick Vujicic, who was not expected to perform any activity except talking due to his disability, was able to swim, run and became famous around the world because of his hard effort. Linking Words
In addition
, when a problem is solved, individuals not only gain experience, but Linking Words
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Therefore
, they can cope with the similar issues that they probably meet in the future.
Despite the above arguments, I believe that admitting the existence of detrimental situations brings considerable benefits. Linking Words
Firstly
, accepting the truth will relieve from stress and tension, which could be a step to reintegrate into their works and create a gap between these people and those who are persistent. Linking Words
For example
, workers who realize the difficulty they are meeting, likely to take a short break for a vacation, Linking Words
as a result
, they not only have a spare time to relax their mind but Linking Words
also
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and prepare the future work plan. Suggestion
optimism
Secondly
, there are citizens who do not have other option but to survive in these conditions. Linking Words
For instance
, tertiary students have difficulty in finding an occupation that matches their major an tend to work in uncomfortable conditions in order to guarantee their basic needs.
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although
there are some evidences to support the argument that people should spend more time and effort to overcome the situations, I believe that it would be better to accept what is happening.Linking Words
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