Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism brings more advantages or disadvantages to a country?

In the wake of technology advancing, it
make
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makes
people have an ability to travel anywhere and make many tourism visit many countries. I think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages. In
this
essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my own point of view. There have many advantages for the country by increasing traveller,
such
as develop the
economy
and grow up the tax income.
For example
, if more and
more tourism
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more tourists
visit the country, it
will be create
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will be created
the economic activities by the consumption of traveller. It is because they must have to
stay accommodation
Accept comma addition
stay, accommodation
, travel by public transport, and so on.
This
will make the development
on
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of
in
the
economy
.
Additionally
, when they buy something or take the transportation, they
also
need to pay for tax.
This
make
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makes
a significant income to the government and the government can allocate
this
money to create the infrastructure in the community.
On the other hand
,
although
tourism can bring the enormous
economy
effectively, there
also
have some drawbacks.
For instance
, some
visiters
go to see a place, as for entertainment
visits
visitors
consume the resource and leave
many
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much
rubbish in the city.
This
will damage the environment. On top of that, the place will be more dense, especially in the landmark and
this
cause
an occurrence of something
case
the local are not willing to go out when they have leisure time because of the crowd.
Consequantly
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Consequently
,
this
will be harmful to the
citizens
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citizens'
mental health. In conclusion, despite the
quanity
how much there is or how many there are of something that you can quantify
quantity
quality
of
visiter
someone who visits
visitors
visitor
may cause the place more crowd and will have an impact on the environment by some lower quality of travellers,
however
, I strongly believe that the enormous advantages
is
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are
more than the negatives, like they can develop the
economy
and make the tax income grow.
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