Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism brings more advantages or disadvantages to a country?

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makes

people have an ability to travel anywhere and make many tourism visit many countries. I think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages. In

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essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my own point of view. There have many advantages for the country by increasing traveller,

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as develop the

economy

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and grow up the tax income.

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, if more and

more tourism

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more tourists

visit the country, it

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will be created

the economic activities by the consumption of traveller. It is because they must have to

stay accommodation

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stay, accommodation

, travel by public transport, and so on.

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will make the development

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of

in

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.

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, when they buy something or take the transportation, they

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need to pay for tax.

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make

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makes

a significant income to the government and the government can allocate

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money to create the infrastructure in the community.

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,

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tourism can bring the enormous

economy

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effectively, there

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have some drawbacks.

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, some

visiters

go to see a place, as for entertainment

visits

visitors

consume the resource and leave

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much

rubbish in the city.

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will damage the environment. On top of that, the place will be more dense, especially in the landmark and

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cause

an occurrence of something

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the local are not willing to go out when they have leisure time because of the crowd.

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will be harmful to the

citizens

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citizens'

mental health. In conclusion, despite the

quanity

how much there is or how many there are of something that you can quantify

quantity

quality

of

visiter

someone who visits

visitors

visitor

may cause the place more crowd and will have an impact on the environment by some lower quality of travellers,

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, I strongly believe that the enormous advantages

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more than the negatives, like they can develop the

economy

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and make the tax income grow.