A friend has written to you ask you how your IELTS studies are going . write a letter telling your friend how you are preparing for the test . -Say what progress you are making -Explain how you are preparing for the test -Say which section you are finding difficult

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Dear Hagger, Good to hear your message again. The

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time we met in the CBD of Auckland since 3 months ago. Sorry for replying to you late. As you know, I am studying hard for my goal which is an IELTS score of 5.5 or above.

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is really difficult for me, especially for me so I can not visit you for a

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and chat with you a lot. I am planning to take the IELTS exam next Monday, but my English Achilles' heel is my reading skills, because when I read English letters the words not only jump but

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ghost. So

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causing my reading scores to be frequently bad.

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I have

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problem but "Where there is will, there is the way" so I am training myself to read a story of idiom which is shortest and easily understood.

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is quite useful for solving my reading issue. How is your new work? I hope everything is going great. I am happy to listen to your life story as well. If I can improve my score, I hope we have a chance to meet each other soon. Best regards By Evelyn

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coherence cohesion

Your letter has a logical structure, but it can be improved by eliminating small inaccuracies and streamlining sentences. For example, instead of, 'I hope we have a chance to meet each other soon,' you could write, 'I hope we can meet soon.'

task achievement

To improve your reading skills, try breaking long sentences into shorter ones for better clarity and understanding.

task achievement

You did well in addressing all three points of the prompt: your progress, preparation, and difficulties.

task achievement

The letter has a friendly and warm tone, which is suitable for the context.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are polite and appropriate.

coherence cohesion

Your paragraphs are generally well-structured and stick to single ideas.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

6.5

Logical structure

6.5

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

7.5

Complete response

7.5

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

198 words

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A friend has written to you ask you how your IELTS studies are going . write a letter telling your friend how you are preparing for the test . -Say what progress you are making -Explain how you are preparing for the test -Say which section you are finding difficult

Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees this is beneficial. To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answers and include relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In most developed countries shopping is not only about buying the goods you need, it is also perceived as entertainment. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples based on your experience

Technology has brought many changes in our lives, especially in the educaion system. One of these is the introduction of online studies. Is this a positive or negative dvelopment? Give readons and examples from your personal opinion.

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