A friend has written to you ask you how your IELTS studies are going . write a letter telling your friend how you are preparing for the test . -Say what progress you are making -Explain how you are preparing for the test -Say which section you are finding difficult

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Dear Hagger, Good to hear your message again. The

last

time we met in the CBD of Auckland since 3 months ago. Sorry for replying to you late. As you know, I am studying hard for my goal which is an IELTS score of 5.5 or above.

This

is really difficult for me, especially for me so I can not visit you for a

while

and chat with you a lot. I am planning to take the IELTS exam next Monday, but my English Achilles' heel is my reading skills, because when I read English letters the words not only jump but

also

ghost. So

that is

causing my reading scores to be frequently bad.

However

I have

this

problem but "Where there is will, there is the way" so I am training myself to read a story of idiom which is shortest and easily understood.

This

is quite useful for solving my reading issue. How is your new work? I hope everything is going great. I am happy to listen to your life story as well. If I can improve my score, I hope we have a chance to meet each other soon. Best regards By Evelyn

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coherence cohesion

Your letter has a logical structure, but it can be improved by eliminating small inaccuracies and streamlining sentences. For example, instead of, 'I hope we have a chance to meet each other soon,' you could write, 'I hope we can meet soon.'

task achievement

To improve your reading skills, try breaking long sentences into shorter ones for better clarity and understanding.

task achievement

You did well in addressing all three points of the prompt: your progress, preparation, and difficulties.

task achievement

The letter has a friendly and warm tone, which is suitable for the context.

coherence cohesion

Your greeting and closing are polite and appropriate.

coherence cohesion

Your paragraphs are generally well-structured and stick to single ideas.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

198 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

6.5

Logical structure

6.5

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

7.5

Complete response

7.5

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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