Computers are being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

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It is certain these days that the computer is increasingly becoming an integral part of the pedagogy.

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essay will illustrate how it has broken geographical boundaries as the primary benefit and the lack of human contact increasing simultaneously as the most significant negative outcome/impact. With technology taking the lead in bringing the world closer, the education system isn’t far behind in embracing

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wonderful phenomenon. One of the biggest advantages of

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inventiveness is the freedom one gets to choose from a plethora of curriculums across the globe from the comfort of one’s home.

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year I enrolled myself in an online doctorate program from a Swiss University and I’m pursuing it at the comfort of my abode. On completion, it will add a prestigious feather to my hat, which

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ingenuity.

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, the youth today are glued completely to digital programs and as an upshot, they are missing out on the essentials; most notably personal interactions and the appreciation for the same. Face to face contact has its fundamental importance in life and learning to develop personal connections are an equally critical skill to have, if not, the most important. To state an example, my daughter’s best friend these days is her iPad (tablet computer) and she has never been interested in joining us to any social gathering. Digitization is developing a different kind of comfort which is leading to isolation, and

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it has a chain of negative repercussions which retard a person’s abilities to develop soft skills and compassion. In conclusion, technology has

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undeniable merit of connecting the world in a way that it has never been seen before, but at the same time, its consumption

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has its perils on human relations and one must be judicious and prudent at the time spent with it and on it.

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, in my opinion, the pros of online education far outweigh the cons associated with it on any measure.

Submitted by Vinesh on Tue Aug 25 2020

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Topic Vocabulary:

1. Interactive learning tools
2. Multimedia presentations
3. Online resources
4. Distance learning
5. Remote areas
6. Digital literacy
7. Problem-solving
8. Critical thinking
9. Technology-driven world
10. Digital textbooks
11. Administrative tasks
12. Cost-effective
13. Distraction
14. Social media
15. Over-reliance
16. Traditional skills
17. Handwriting
18. Face-to-face communication
19. Technical problems
20. Digital divide
21. Inequality
22. Educational opportunities

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

Your opinion

Many things can influence the academic achievement and emotional growth of a student. In this regard, peers have more of an impact than teachers do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this topic?

In the future all cars,buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the diadvantages?

Why do you think self discipline is better than motivation?

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of Income. Unfortunately, tourism can be cause of lot of problem if its not well managed . What are the advantage and dis advantage in the modern world? Do you think advantage overweight the disadvantage .