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Film is a less important form of art than literature and painting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Since the dawn of civilization, film has played an important role in the society.
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, many think that it is not as significant as literature or painting. I completely agree and will explain why these forms of
art
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 are more essential, despite the many uses of film. Literature or painting is open to different interpretation which are usually based on personal views.
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 means that the audience gives meaning to the piece based on their imagination, unlike in films, where the message from a clip can only be interpreted from the producer's point of view.
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, the book "Seven Shades of Grey", had readers imagining what the protagonist (Mr Grey) looked like in all his splendour.
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 made the book very popular and interesting. Whereas, in the adaptation of the book into a movie, viewers were left disappointed.
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 gives room for everyone to enjoy a work of
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 as, a painted image, because it is based on their own perception of the message and not just the creator's. It goes to show that these types of
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 are more relevant. They are not easily pirated and even when a "
knockoff
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" version is produced, the original object still retains its main value or in some cases, they may appreciate.
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, films get duplicated and mass produced on different platforms making them lose market price.
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, the famous work of Leonardo Da Vinci called, "The Monalisa". A perfect masterpiece, even though, recreated over the years by imitators, has not depreciated.
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, painted images or
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 edition books have recorded a noticeable increase in their worth over time, when compared to films.
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, they are more significant. In conclusion, it is true that films have, in fact, some usefulness nowadays. The many benefits of these other kinds of
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,
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, make them more important.

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