Your neighbours have recently written you a complaint about the noise from your flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter, explain the reasons for the noise and apologise. Describe what actions you will take in future to reduce the noise.

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Dear Mr Martin, I am writing

this

letter in response to grievances raised by you about

noise

which is coming from my flat and causing you disturbance. Actually, my 6-year-old kid has

poem

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a poem

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recitation competition in his school, and I was preparing him for the final competition. I am deeply sorry for the disturbance it caused for

two-week

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two weeks

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. It was a mistake committed by My family. I am apologising for the inconvenience caused to you because of

this

. I was deeply hurt to hear that your health has

affected

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been affected

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noise

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the noise

a noise

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coming out of my flat. Now I have taken sufficient

measure

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measures

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to control the

noise

level coming out of my flat. I have installed

noise

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a noise

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conciliation system in my flat. it will reduce the

noise

coming out of my flat.

Also

, if

noise

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the noise

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level breaches

certain

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a certain

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level of

noise

it will auto off the

noise

coming out from

music

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the music

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instrument,

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or laptop. I

Hope

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hope

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you will be satisfied with my efforts to conceal

noise

from my flat. Yours sincerely, Jay Mclauren

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task achievement

While your letter successfully addresses the reasons for the noise, the apology, and future actions, be careful with some grammatical errors such as 'I was deeply hurt to hear that your health has affected by noise...' (should be '...your health was affected by the noise...').

coherence cohesion

The letter generally flows well and is logically structured. However, use proper articles and pay attention to tense consistency to enhance clarity.

task achievement

You have fully responded to the task prompt, providing clear explanations, an apology, and future measures to reduce noise.

coherence cohesion

Your paragraphs are well-organized and each contains a single main idea, enhancing readability.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing in your letter are appropriate and polite, creating a respectful tone.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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