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Many companies sponser sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think this is good for the world of sports, while others think its is a negative. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In the present days the world is like an open door for enormous opportunities. Some are the opinion that in the present days people are lucky to have so many opportunities and some others opposite. In
this
 disquisition delineates the agree points because of the various reasons. To embark on, the institutional and occupational
growth
 in the economy
provide
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provides
enormous opportunity
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an enormous opportunity
enormous opportunities
 to the public. When the considering the past the institutions are limited and the vacancies
also
, so they select only few
number
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numbers
 of people and the remaining society became hopeless.
However after
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However, after
 the few years the sudden
growth
 in the every field present various opportunities and in that occasion
they
objective case of they
them
 was a space for choices because of the huge availability make the person to
became
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become
 rational. In the past decades the educational institutions
was limited
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were limited
 if they
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 their seats others become
losers but
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losers, but
 nowadays the number of colleges and schools become enlarged so they have the multi various choices
infront
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in front
 of them to choose.
For example
 the
growth
 of the
indian
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
 company TATA vehicles who was enlarged their branches
to
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in
 different states in
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
 that helped to provide more job opportunities to the each state. There is an another example is that a study in
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
 based on the educational
institutional
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institutions
 reveals that the number of private or aided colleges is increasing over the
last
 two years.
This
 is a sign of improvement in choices of schooling. Moving on to another supportive point is that the
growth
 in the field of technology which provide unlimited information about choices. In the past the world
have
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had
has
 a major drawback that was the lack of information because it was hard to find opportunities
however
 the revolution in communication clear
this
 issue completely. The information about choices are easily available on
network
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the network
a network
.
For example
 the app Tennica in
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
 is very popular to provide job offers. There is
another of school
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another school
 of thought is that the availability and choices are only in the hand of the
privilage
blessed with privileges
privileged
classess
a collection of things sharing a common attribute
classes
class
 in the society if it so their argument is neither or robust nor sensible the choices are available for everyone Conclusively the world is full of choices with the help of developed economy and technology. It is hoped that the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
 should take steps to provide more facilities to the people who
till
work hard
toil
 not aware of
this
.
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