You're planning to take a vacation. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: 1. Describe the vacation spot you have chosen 2. Explain how you plan to spend your time there 3. Invite your friend to join you on your vacation.

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Dear Larry Smith, Hello, I hope you are well. I am writing

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letter to description about my vacation First of all, I am planning to take a holiday, because I am worn out from my work.

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, I have chosen one remarkable place. So, I decided to stay near the beach for about 7 days. There are lots of inexpensive fish restaurants and shipping. I enjoy it when I see the ocean, the tide, and so on.

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, I have a week to spend my vacation. I spend the whole week cruising near the sea. After that, I would like to go to a seafood restaurant.

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, I love to take part in clambake. I cordially invite you to join my recreation, I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. We would be very happy if you could come with me. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Parizoda.

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structure

Ensure the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Begin with a brief greeting and introduction, followed by the main content, and end with a suitable closing statement.

tone

Implement a more personal and engaging tone by adding some personal thoughts or feelings about the trip, making the invitation feel more heartfelt.

grammar

Proofread the letter to catch and correct minor grammatical errors and typos, such as 'I am writing this letter to description about my vacation', which should be 'describe my vacation'.

paragraphing

Use paragraphs effectively to separate different ideas or parts of the letter. Each of the three tasks should ideally start a new paragraph to enhance clarity and organization.

vocabulary

Consider using more varied and descriptive language to vividly describe the vacation spot, activities planned, and why it would be enjoyable for your friend. This can make the letter more enticing and persuasive.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

157 words

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