Many people think that important things in life are mostly free or can’t be bought. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There are several things that a human being, deeply desires for in his/her life, and these things are of great value. Most individuals believe that these valuable things

such

as love, success, friendship, or, family can not be purchased, I,

however

, agree with

this

opinion but there is some price to be paid. In

this

essay, we shall elaborate

this

view

further

Firstly

, feelings like love or success are not readily available anywhere. It is the emotions which a person receives irrespective of the time, place or condition

such

as a love from a mother to her child.

Secondly

, people work hard to procure some of these emotions; to illustrate, success is not procured overnight any profession has to start from scratch and with years of experience, knowledge, and skills makes him/her taste prosperity.

Lastly

, these feelings have different resources and every now and

then

it reaches out to the person deserving;

for example

, from parents, siblings, friends, and spouses have no restrictions.

Moreover

, even though there are plenty of ways an individual acquires

such

things, there is a price to pay not in the form of money, but with the same feelings in return,

for instance

, a trust between spouse, friends and family is mostly returned with similar amount of loyalty.

Furthermore

, it is destiny that determines the quantity and quality of things occurring in a person’s life. To summarize, there are two sides to a coin;

therefore

, the stuff

that is

important to us can not have a price tag as it only can be measured by mutual feeling

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

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Many people think that important things in life are mostly free or can’t be bought. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Include an introduction and conclusion

The floor plan shows changes made to a home during a 6-month period.

Some people think that modern tecchnology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable Discuss both views and give your opinion

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