You and your family have just come back from a holiday staying in a rented accommodation overlooking the sea. The apartment was very unsatisfactory. Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the agency from which you rented the apartment. In your letter: give details of the things that were unsatisfactory explain the reactions of the members of your family ask the manager what he/she is going to do about the situation. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follow
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing a letter to express my frustration towards rented living quarters and complaint to the manager of the agency who rented the apartment. Recently, I visited the sea for a holiday with my family to enjoy the vacation, but
overall
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dissatisfaction
with the management.
Let me explain my situation, We stayed in an apartment called Crescent Shine which outlook has stunning infrastructure where Replace the word
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whereas
inside the building it was untidy typically inside the washroom as well balcony and kitchen which is highly vital for family members. Linking Words
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, the Balcony with full of dust Linking Words
moreover
it is not up to the mark of what we expect.
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On the other hand
, the Water gear was not working to take an early morning shower which was a total disappointment to all, Linking Words
Moreover
, the Family members' reactions were displeasure, they were extremely upset and disheartened about the service furnished by the administrators.
I would appreciate it if you could provide better service in the upcoming days. Kindly explain to me what kind of implantation for the betterment of Linking Words
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I look forward to your prompt response and a swift resolution to Change the punctuation
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Yours faithfully,
Latha Nagaraju.Linking Words
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coherence and cohesion
Your letter has a general structure, but clearer paragraphing would help. Consider separating the description of issues and your family’s reactions into distinct paragraphs.
task achievement
While you expressed your dissatisfaction, try to be more specific about the expectations you had for the accommodation.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure to check your grammar and word choice; for example, 'outlook' should be 'outlook' and 'untidy' could be complemented with specific examples.
task achievement
You conveyed your feelings clearly and showed your family's reactions, which adds a personal touch to your complaint.
task achievement
Your intention to seek a resolution demonstrates a constructive approach to your complaint, which is commendable.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite