Some people think that young people in the past were more polite comparing to young people nowadays, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In today's world technology and developments always make people busy and hurry.

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makes some people think that younger age group people are impolite, whereas others are of the opinion that these people are kind and well mannered.

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with, in earlier days people used to live in joint family.

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the members share their work, money and their possessions.

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living environment made them to understand each others, behave respectful with others.

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, It is a general talk from elderly people that they always obey and respect their teacher and never used to raise their voice or argue against them.

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, these generation youngs are always rude with elders and never heed to their advices.

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, today's generation youngsters are well educated and they

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tendency. It is always said that "Don't judge a book by its cover".

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, even these young people are looking impolite and unkind, they

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tendency and responsibilities towards society.

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, In 2017, there was an unprecedented situation happened in Chennai, that the entire city was flooded and thousand of people were struck up in their homes with no food and water. During

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critical condition a plethora of youngsters came forward to help and saved many lives. In conclusion, as the world is changing everyday, there is always a generation gap between youngsters and elderly people.

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difference makes some people feel that the young people are behaving rude and unkind.

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, I personally deny that these days youngsters are unkind and not polite to others.

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Some people think that young people in the past were more polite comparing to young people nowadays, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Your opinion

More and more parents begin to allow their children to play on computers and tablets as they think children should learn technology skills. Do advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages or not?

In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? why do you thinks some people might not be happy to give up using Cash?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?