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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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The environmental problem is one of the most widely discussed topics in recent years. Recycling is a paramount method to reduce pollutants to the environment.
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, some people point out that not enough amount of household waste is recycled and suggest that a legal restrictions must be launched by the government. In the justification of
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 notion, I partly accord with it because a financial incentive is
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 a good motivation to encourage recycling. On the one hand, many countries have launched legal requirements to enforce citizens to reduce the amount of household rubbish, which have been very effective.
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, Japanese people are obligated to separate their waste from home to different types of materials for recycling and they would be published with incorrect separation. By having a strict instruction and harsh punishments, people are forced to participate in the recycling, and
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, more rubbish would be recycled.
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, it may cause a heavy burden to people, which may raise an unpleasant feeling to the government.
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, monetary incentive can
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 provide motivations for encouraging residents to recycle more waste. A recycling scheme can be introduced with providing rewards or shopping coupons to attract the citizens getting involved in recycling. To cite an example, a non-governmental organization in Hong Kong has introduced a scheme to some housing estates. By recycling more rubbish, residents can collect points for redeeming rewards and coupons. It has brought a great influence to the habit of recycling of citizens. To conclude, I believe that the law enforcement and financial incentives are useful methods to urge people to recycle more. The government and citizens should cooperate to save our environment..
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Waste management
  • Mandatory regulations
  • Compliance and enforcement
  • Recyclable materials
  • Circular economy
  • Landfill diversion
  • Conservation
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Sanitation services
  • Public policy
  • Behavioral change
  • Eco-consciousness
  • Resource recovery
  • Single-stream recycling
  • Waste hierarchy
  • Economic incentives
  • Ecological footprint
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