The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In
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modern world, it is irrefutable that the world is facing a big challenge with environmental issues.
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, there are a large number of people who argue that oil prices should be increased worldwide. In my view, I accept that the government should increase the fuel prices, but
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, I believe, deforestation is
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of the main problems. On the
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hand, there is no doubt that individuals, in
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day and age, prefer private transportation as it has become easy to own a four-wheeler on
installments
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instalments
instruments
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from banks, merchants, and other showrooms.
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, vehicles are cost-effective and very economical.
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, the increasing number of vehicles is
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of the major reasons for global warming.
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, the state should not only raise the fuel prices, but
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also apply
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hefty taxes on cars, motorcycles, and other heavy vehicles.
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,
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will encourage local communities to use public transport and car-pooling system.
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, cutting down trees and plants are
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of the key reasons. To elucidate, according to the World Health Organization, the news published in BBC newspaper
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year, the population in the world has increased by about 40% in the
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few decades.
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, builders are converting forests into residential areas as the property demand is at peak.
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, overcrowding and overpopulation is the reason that we have a huge number of factories and industries as well, especially in countryside areas. To sum up, changes in the environment invites many health diseases and
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should be controlled by the state by taking strict actions
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as increasing the cost of fuel, apply huge taxes on electronic cars, and inspire citizens to plant trees in their surroundings.
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