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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative impact?

Each and every individual
work
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 as an employee, employer or runs a business to survive. Today, with the advancement of technology, the internet has crafted a
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 of opportunities to make money online while sitting at
home
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 rather than moving to a workplace.
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, perfection does not exist and everything has its assets and liabilities. In
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 essay, I would like to delve into both the positive and negative impacts of
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 at
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 before making an argument. The
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 school of thought claims that each individual has at least once thought of making money from
home
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 without going to the office, which is now possible through the internet. Nowadays, a large
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 of companies are allowing their employee's to
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 from
home
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. People can enjoy their family time as well as perform their job from
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.
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, a
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 can do their office
work
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 from anywhere on the globe, without worrying about any situation which may affect their jobs.
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, during the pandemic COVID - 19, there was a complete lockdown for a couple of months a large
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 of people lost their jobs and people were not able to earn money for their kitchen. But, the IT sector or the jobs which could be performed from
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 were not affected. Meanwhile, a
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 of difficulties are
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 faced with doing the same. One must require a stable internet connection which may not be a big issue for some, but having a laptop or a computer is compulsory and may create problems too. The fact cannot be denied that pupils performing underprivileged jobs
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 as assistant, watchmen, and many more jobs are at higher risks of vanishing.
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, it becomes difficult for a
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 to follow a particular routine.
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 to which he/she may start feeling bore and start working slowly.
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, a
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 might extend his
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 by an hour and
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 again in an hour and ends up becoming too lazy. In the end, I would like to conclude that working from
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 is beneficial and have a positive impact on society and a
person
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's personal life. Yet, some people who perform jobs like peon may end up losing their jobs. The companies should take care of their employees so that they do not get affected.

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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