Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is believed that music is a good channel bridging the gap of people regardless of their ages and cultures. In my opinion,
soul
Suggestion
the soul
can connect people in term of their cultural background, yet it can even distance the
generation
Suggestion
generational
difference.
Firstly
,
music
Suggestion
the music
will eventually exaggerate the gap of age difference,
melody form
Accept comma addition
melody, form
a standard label between
disparate maturity group
Suggestion
disparate maturity groups
the disparate maturity group
. Since
tune
Suggestion
the tune
is one of the art forms to reflect the social situation and reality, people in different life stages incline to listen specific piece which reflect their social life and match their maturity.
For example
, my grandparents love listening to Chinese opera, while my peer society enjoys pop song like Justin Biber and One Direction. The
melody
style forms a clear differentiate line to polarize people in their own generation.
Therefore
,
this
is one of the factors in
disparity
Suggestion
disparate
audiences.
However
, music is a universal language to unite people regardless of the cultural background. Recently, experts have begun to expose the mankind is share same musical grammar. People can understand
melody
and easily get arousal.
For instance
, audiences will be happier if they listen to rapid
melody
, vice versa. In fact, soul plays an indispensable role in promoting universal value,
such
as the song ‘we are the world’ is promoting love and peace worldwide. Even it has been translated into different version, people with disparate cultural background
also
enjoy and understand its underlying message.
Thus
, singing is a powerful channel to shrink the gap of people in the world. In conclusion,
melody
can influence the world.
Although
it large the age disparity, it helps to connect people from multitudes cultures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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