people say that instead of we seeing the internet as a means of creating diverse communication possibilities worldwide, we should be concerned on the effect it is having on our social interactions. Do you agree or disagree to this view?

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Truly people say that

instead

of us seeing the

internet

as a means of creating diverse

communication

possibilities worldwide, we should be concerned about the effect it is having on our social interactions which I totally agree too. One of the reasons I agree with

this

view is because people now spend more time on the

internet

doing what doesn'

benefit them.

For instance

, watching videos of immoral activities, as the time being spent watching these videos could be spent on building good

communication

skills with people around.

Moreover

, people are now resorting to the

internet

to do things that could be done in person or be done by people around them.

Furthermore

, the

internet

has helped people to lessen their interactions with people, which doesn'

help in building their people skills, good

communication

skills, leadership skills and all other skills needed for good social interaction.

For instance

, I prefer using the

internet

(WhatsApp to be precise) to message my friend or roommate

that is

around me for something I need all because I probably don'

want to get up from where am sitting or I don'

actually feel like talking.

However

, the

internet

has truly created ways of communicating worldwide through ( Skype, Facebook, WhatsApp, Twitter, Instagram, Zoom, Email, and all other social medias) so you don'

have to travel far or take a lot of time to send a letter to someone in another country or journey down to deliver goods and services to a person but

this

same

internet

has so much limited physical and social interactions between people. In conclusion, the

internet

does not help to build one's people skills,

communication

skills and other necessary skills needed to have a good, proper and sound social interaction with people.

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Topic Vocabulary:

global connections
face-to-face interaction
social isolation
mental health
diverse communication
social skills
virtual and physical interactions
relationship maintenance
online communication
in-person interaction
meaningful connections
social media platforms
forums and chat apps
balance
overuse
shallow interactions

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people say that instead of we seeing the internet as a means of creating diverse communication possibilities worldwide, we should be concerned on the effect it is having on our social interactions. Do you agree or disagree to this view?

Fully explain your ideas

It is common that in many companies people from different ages work together in a same team. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantges?

Many social media accounts are fake What problems does ths cause? What Solatons can you suget?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?