Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

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It is clear that troublesome scholars impact other ones very badly.
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few individuals state that these disorderly children should be clubbed and made to study jointly, I disagree with
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argument and in
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essay I will provide my outlook with few examples. Those who support the idea of putting the troublemaker students in a different class may argue that it is our moral responsibility to provide the right environment to studious lads, so that they can attend
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a collection of things sharing a common attribute
classes
with utmost attention and clarify their doubts. At the same time,
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suits the teachers and other group of students
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, the teacher of
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disruptive group can try to understand the concerns and try to go slow on basics or focus more on some subject if the need be.
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, if some student is on some wrong path, he / she can be counselled. In my opinion, everyone should get a fair chance to study from the best teachers including
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this problem
these problems
-making kids. In case these troublesome kids are put in a
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unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
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class, it would jeopardize their chances to improve upon and do well, hampering their confidence in a big way.
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, in today's
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world, everyone
talks about thinking out of the box for a problem, but that can't happen if everyone follows a set path, so a mix of different type of students is a must for overall learning and growth. We should not forget that to make trouble
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someone needs to have a sharp mind and cannot be expected from a naive person. In conclusion, despite the benefits of providing the right environment to studious young lads and providing extra help clubbing troublesome students differently, we must take into consideration the
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possibilities
of getting
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an education
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the best teachers
and learning to think out of the box. Personally, I feel that providing equal opportunity to every kid
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more just, and justice in my view is paramount.
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