In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These
day many
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days, many
days many
people
read
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are reading
newspapers or books with their phone or iPad
instead
of printed paper. I totally agree in the future, more and more people will not buy printed newspapers and books. Here are some reasons why they will not buy printed newspapers or books.
Firstly
, most of printed documents need to pay to read, but usually online books or newspapers are free or cheaper than printed. If there are same contents in online books and printed books, printed books more expensive because for make a printed
book
needs more process and more people than
online
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online books
an online book
book
. I think payment is the most important that people choose what they want to read.
Therefore
, many people choose online books
instead
of expensive printed books or newspapers.
Secondly
, read books or newspapers on online is more convenient than printed. If people read books by a smartphone or iPad, they need only one device
for
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to
read. That
mean
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means
is people can bring and read many books and newspapers
for
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from
everywhere and any times if they have a smart device. People do not need to bring heavy books or huge newspapers
for
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to
read.
Last
reason that people will not buy printed books or newspapers, online books have audio service for
reader
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readers
the reader
. Many people read books or newspapers when they are going to work
at
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on
transportation. During rush hour people
can not
can not
cannot
open a
book
because buses or subways are too
crowded but
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crowded, but
if they have online books, they can listen books even crowded places.
Also people
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Also, people
who drive to go to work can listen a
book
. I think
this
is one of benefit read online books. In conclusion, online books or newspapers have more benefit than printed.
therefore
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Therefore
, in the future, many people will not buy printed books or newspapers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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