Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or reaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Although
involving voluntary works in school Linking Words
curricular
is beneficial to the Suggestion
curricula
neighborhood
in certain extents, it does exert negative influences. a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
Therefore
, it is controversially argued whether Linking Words
unpaid
Suggestion
the unpaid community service
community
Use synonyms
service
should be included in the program or not.
Not only does unpaid Use synonyms
community
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service
allow adolescents to acquire Use synonyms
soft skills but
it Suggestion
soft skills, but
also
brings benefits to the neighbourhood. Linking Words
First
of all, students are offered to gain practical knowledge from helping people out. Working at institutions Linking Words
such
as nursing home, Linking Words
for instance
, help them learn how to get along well with elderly people. Linking Words
In addition
to that, by taking part in cleaning the streets, teenagers could acknowledge what street workers may suffer, Linking Words
thus
avoid littering. Linking Words
Secondly
, workload of people in the vicinity could be lesson due to students’ help. Linking Words
Therefore
, they may feel happier and work more effectively.
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Conversely
, it is supposed that voluntary works may lead to consequences that affect students badly. Partaking in Linking Words
community
Use synonyms
service
requires Use synonyms
teenagers both
time and physical health. Accept comma addition
teenagers, both
In other words
, they may find it difficult to balance between their study and voluntary works. Linking Words
Moreover
, since adolescents are inexperienced in works Linking Words
such
as teaching children or taking care of the elder, hardly could they not make any mistakes. Linking Words
As a result
, they could become a burden of the work Linking Words
instead
of being helpful.
In conclusion, despite the fact that joining unpaid Linking Words
community
Use synonyms
service
is advantageous to both students and the locality, it may result in negative effects. Use synonyms
Therefore
, students should strike a balance so as to both study well and being helpful to the Linking Words
community
.Use synonyms
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