As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is a growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures should be taken to solve the problems?

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the world wide more concern about the

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pollution

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essay we are going to share some sources of pollution

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how we can solve it

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of pollution which is

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the cars

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a cloud of fine particles suspended in a gas

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Plastic

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is a huge problem for our

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problem, why and how we can solve it

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of all, no one can live without

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most of our items and tools made from

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, all the industries now uses the

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on so many things

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like home items

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kitchen tools

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our cell phones everything

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which is not

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free or available for use or disposition

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its not easy disposal it, most of companies or factories they just throw it

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the sea or ocean

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which will kill all of our sea life

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like a fish

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will affect the

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issue

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we can solve it by encouraging our social habits

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through the government should be so tough with the companies with a lot of fines if they cross the rules. Main solve on

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part is recycling the

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, so end of

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we have to be careful of our world its for our future and our children as well

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and struggling with it to clean our sea and clean the

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