In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays the argument over whether owning a home or renting not settled yet. Allow me to share my experience about
this
important topic of
this
essay. In the world there are so many different cultures, different different people mind
also
. Some of people like the stable life
,
Accept space
,
other get board easier from the same place.
For example
, if you are not in your country so why you are going to buy a building
,
Accept space
,
instead
of rent it, But on my opinion own a house is a main goal for a lot of people and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am one of them. The reason behind that why
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have to rent a house
instead
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
can own it its for me and my son's future
also
its a good invest at least I have something which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
can sell it in case there is any issue with me,
On the other hand
buying a home, it's a big issue because you have to save a lot of money to buy a house
this
is a negative point on it so we have to learn how to cope with it if we can't go ahead for buying the building. On the end all goals depend on your ability to buy or no, I think all of us want to buy our own home
,
Accept space
,
but not all of us have ability to do it. So you can work on your goals until you will reach it so do your best and god will do the rest.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • renting
  • importance
  • sense of security
  • stability
  • financial investment
  • asset
  • customize
  • decorate
  • belonging
  • community
  • potential
  • future generations
  • long-term
  • cost advantage
  • control
  • living space
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