As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
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a result of the population growth crisis, the ownership and driving of Suggestion
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transport
have increased with the progress of nations. Use synonyms
This
trend would introduce both pros and cons, but I believe that the drawbacks do outweigh the benefits.
On the one hand, it is clear that owning a vehicle would bring about several advantages. One evident strength is that it would offer personal comfort to the owners. Linking Words
In other words
, they do not need to wait at the station any moment for getting into a public Linking Words
transport
, thereby saving that time and utilizing it in productive ways. Another reason is that it would help them to avoid the climate difficulties, Use synonyms
such
as excessive heat or heavy rain, and easily reach their destination. Linking Words
Last
but not least, it would be more convenient to Linking Words
transport
goods in car rather than using public Use synonyms
transport
which is not secure and is short of storage space.
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On the other hand
, I argue that there are some obvious disadvantages would arise. Linking Words
First
, excessive numbers of car will severely contaminate the atmosphere. Linking Words
This
is because the growth of vehicles Linking Words
emit
more fumes, like carbon dioxide and nitrogen, which are perilous and harmful for the atmosphere. Suggestion
emits
Second
, having more cars will pollute the air. Linking Words
Consequently
, the polluted ambiance promotes respiratory diseases and decreases the ideal standard of living. Linking Words
Finally
, Linking Words
the high
levels of car users on the road, especially during rush hour can lead to lots of congestion, traffic jams and a lack of parking spaces.
In conclusion, there are plus points to have a privately-owned vehicle. Suggestion
the highest
Nevertheless
, it seems to me that its disadvantages would be more significant regarding the contaminated atmosphere, the polluted air and the congestion.Linking Words
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