The pie charts provide information about the proportion of three kind of nutrients included in common meals in the USA. These nutrients might be harmful when eaten pretty often.
The pie charts provide information about the proportion of three
kind
of Change to a plural noun
kinds
nutrients
included in common meals in the USA. These nutrients
might be harmful when eaten pretty often.
Overall
, the greatest proportion of nutrients
are eaten during dinner, it includes, sodium
, saturated fat and sugar
. Whereas
for breakfast people
eat the lowest percentages of nutrients
. The highest percentage of sugar
is presented in snacks.
During dinner, people
eat 43% of sodium
which is the largest fraction eaten compared with the other nutrients
. This
figure is followed by the saturated fat that accounted for 37% of the nutrient consumed in
dinner. Change preposition
at
Also
, during the lunch meal, people
eat 29% of sodium
and 26% of saturated fat.
However
, when it comes to people
eating snacks, almost half of the nutrients
eaten are added sugar
and only 14% of sodium
. For breakfast, people
eat the lowest fraction of nutrients
overall
, they only eat 14% of sodium
, and the same amount of saturated fat and added sugar
with 16%.Submitted by juansetirado on
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