It is better for children if the whole family including aunts, uncles and so on are involved in a child’s upbringing, rather than just their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is important to consider that raising up a

child

is becoming more and more difficult for several factors. Whereas some people believe that children should be raised in a big family, I would argue that, while it is helpful, it should be the parent’s task up to a point.

To begin

with, one of the most significant advantages behind the parent’s growing rather than a whole family is that the

child

can be easily controlled without the interfering of others.

This

is can add a lot to their mental and physical abilities. It has been shown that multiple opinions can have an immensely negative impact on them as they see themselves in a

chaos

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chaotic

, especially in their teenage period. Not only

this

, but the high age of a

child

’s relative should

also

be taken into consideration.

For instance

, the mental thinking and desires of a grandfather is different than a father or mother.

Nevertheless

, nowadays, many parents have jobs and there should be an appropriate place for their children to put them in. For

this

reason, some parents leave their children

at

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in

their relatives’ home

until

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by

having their work done. It is sometimes difficult for a

child

to grow up at a nursery for a long period as not all parents can afford to pay the

highly

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highest

higher

high

amount of these institutes. Having said that, some families do not rely much on the hygiene and caring which are provided by these nursing homes.

Therefore

, they would prefer to send them to their relatives in terms of more safety and more cleanliness. In conclusion,

although

it is important that a

child

should be raised by their parents, the benefits behind the raising of their relatives which result in extra caring and feeding should be taken into consideration.