some people think that secondery school children should study international news as one of the school subject. give reasons for your answer and includ any relevent example from your own knowledge

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Nowadays, thanks to the development technology, the importance of international Media increase more and more.

That is

why some individuals call to introduce it in the secondary school program. Personally, I think that it is not

such

a wise idea not just for the negative impact on our children but

also

on the society. In

this

essay I will say why those people are wrong and why.

Firstly

instead

of pedagogical programs, channel news doesn’t care about the quality of their diffusions.

This

because it’s totally commercial, there are no experts to control if the transmissions respond to some conditions, at least, if it there is any aim or something to learn from. Many studies showed that the lack of pedagogical methods led to the failure of the processes of education.

That is

why it’s so important to avoid

this

kind of subject in college.

Secondly

, international news could have a negative impact on our children, because at

this

age, they don’t have the necessary hindsight, the

first

certain influence would be on their behaviour which can be damaged because of the violence from a live war reported by different channel all over the world like EL DJAZIZA NEWS, BBC or CNN FOX. Another one is the psychological effect

such

as the constant feeling of fairness and

unsafety

caused by the flux of bloody pictures, bombardments and other acts of cannibalism.

Moreover children

Accept comma addition

Moreover, children

would

percept

the world unjust and nothing worth living. Currently, International Media don’t reply to the educational rules. Unless the reviewing of their program according to scholastic directions and removing of all the scenes of violence, universal news remains a real danger for our kids and the whole society.

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

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6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

global awareness, fostering, interconnectedness, critical thinking, analyzing, bias, complexities, proficiency, debates, articulate, empathy, cultural sensitivity, diverse cultures, global citizenship, globalized world, interconnected, economic, political, social landscape, informed, responsible, global issues

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some people think that secondery school children should study international news as one of the school subject. give reasons for your answer and includ any relevent example from your own knowledge

Include an introduction and conclusion

In today's world many people own a smartphone do you thinh advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Some people think that the government should fund music, dance and arts lessons for children. Others think that they should be funded by private businesses or by children's families. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend, while others argue that it leads to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.