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 It is said that we should live with climate change instead of fighting against it. Do you agree or not?

#climate #change
In recent times
,
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,
weather
 changes are hotly debated topic across the world.
Although
 many might agree with
this
 statement, I completely disagree with
this
 notion not only because of the efforts for the survival of humanity against the climatic changes and the positive outcome for
future
 generations but
also
 because of problems caused as a consequence of these changes.
This
 essay will explore how these factors justify my opinion
Firstly
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the factor that compelled me to disagree with the statement is that the continuance of mankind is merely possible because of the efforts done against the changing
weather
. As natural resources are rapidly depleting due to a rapidly growing population, so measures have to be taken for the saviour of mankind against
such
 changes.Take the example Brazil
,
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,
strict government policies has resulted in savings of millions of people against
weather
 changes.
Thus
,
survival
Suggestion
the survival
 of humanity is possible because of effective methods.
Secondly
, it is
also
 our
first
 and foremost duty to save the climate from the changes for our upcoming generation.As these changes has drastically affected the surrounding environment so can cause a worrying threat to our
future
 generation.
For instance
,
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,
the planning committee of the USA has included the
future
 policies for saving the climate named as saving our planet.
Hence
, protecting the climate will be beneficial for the coming generation.
Finally
,
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,
I believe that climatic changes can lead to serious problems in the world.As the extremes of
weather
 conditions, drought and floods are
as a result
 of
such
 changes. To sum up
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,
I believe that I completely disagree with
this
 statement not only because of survival of the community and
future
 generations, but
also
 the serious issues
as a result
 of these changes.
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