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Many working people get littler or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many people working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

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In recent years
,
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,
the awareness about taking care of an individual's health is less prioritized compared to the other prospects in
life
.
This
 leads to
majority
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the majority
a majority
 of the people is not giving importance to their fitness level resulting in serious health problems.
This
 essay highlights two of the main causes and the ways to mitigate the issues. One of the greatest
challenge
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challenges
 is the
sendentary
requiring sitting or little activity
sedentary
life
 style followed by most of the working people and
this
 leads to obesity or inadequate development.
This
 is because of the workaholic nature in many of the employees and to achieve career progression by stretching after working hours to meet the target.
For instance
,
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,
the under performer
try
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tries
 to extend and work even on weekends to get the chances of promotion in the upcoming performance appraisal.
Thus many
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Thus, many
 of them have no time to exercise to detoxify the negative effects in the body due to the huge working pressure during office hours. The potential remedies would be
transforming
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transformed
 into
active
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the active lifestyle
active lifestyle
an active lifestyle
life
 style by maintaining a proper work-
life
 balance.
This
 may be achieved by enrolling them into exercise regimes and sports programmes.To illustrate
,
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,
many of the software companies have inbuilt gym and sports
facilties
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
 for the well-being of their employees.So the workforce
do not need
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does not need
 to set a particular time for their leisure activities rather they can utilize it in the working hours itself.
Also
,
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,
this
 results in greater output and job satisfaction in
workplace
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a workplace
the workplace
workplaces
 which
inturn
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in turn
 increases the productivity. In conclusion
,
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,
the long working hours and the desire to climb faster on their career results in serious health issues.There are various measures to mitigate these problems by maintaining balance between their personal and professional
life
 and participating in extracurricular activities.
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