Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that money should be spent on improving living standards on earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Certainly, space research is the most important aspect for
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the
development of
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the
globe. A hefty amount of money is spent on galaxy research, whereas a section of society says that amount of money should be used by the
ministry
on other parameters
instead
. I, would agree with
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the
statement
however
, the
ministry
should plan for all the aspects. While initiating, the most important aspect of cosmos research could be satellites, as satellite cover all the important aspects for the overall development of the universe,
such
as communication, which could be done in various ways like, live broadcast, telephonic connectivity,
in addition
, to
this
satellite
also
connects the world through
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an
the
internet connection. One could use
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the
internet for various purpose, live classes, online shopping, video conference and many more.
Moreover
, they are even used for border security purpose. Nuclear testing in India was aborted by the U.S officials. To add on, satellites are
also
used as the medium of navigation, google maps are used mostly by everyone in the world.
Nonetheless
,
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the
ministry should even focus on other aspects. Medical facilities should be improved in order to do so,
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the
ministry has to spend a portion of bills on enhancing technology.
In addition
to
this
authority should concentrate on ameliorating the education and the vocational education system of the country, after
this
policymakers should, find ways for reducing
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the
unemployment rate. To conclude, I would agree,
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a
huge amount of funds are spent on space observation and
ministry
should focus on the parameters even, for improving the standards of the country overall.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • space exploration
  • scientific discoveries
  • cutting-edge technology
  • pioneering research
  • socio-economic development
  • improved healthcare
  • education
  • poverty alleviation
  • infrastructure
  • balanced approach
  • cost-effective
  • prioritize
  • allocate
  • resources
  • budget
  • investment
  • sustainable development
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