You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting. In your letter, you should tell: * what you have done for the company in the year you worked there * what changes you would like to recommend * what training you require

#manager #company #year #changes

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear sir/madam, I am writing to inform you that we have a meeting tomorrow at the Park Plaza Hotel, 11:00 am. In

this

Linking Words

meeting, we have the main focus on customer

service

Use synonyms

, which was worsting day by day, due to various reasons. Let me explain what I did so far for the corporation.

First

Linking Words

of all, I work as an assistant manager at seven eleven, so I have many responsibilities regarding check-in fuel, grocery stuff, beverages, chicken, and according to need, I ordered everything.

Moreover

Linking Words

, when I have

time

Use synonyms

, I did the cleaning and helped the other employees on till (

service

Use synonyms

customers). Seriously, I increased the chicken sale, which is much better

from

Change preposition

than

show examples

two years ago, as well I improved customer

service

Use synonyms

to increases company sales. I want some customer

service

Use synonyms

changes, especially ask offers, point cards, Greet proper manner, which is helping to boost company sales. Apart from

this

Linking Words

, we need to think about the cleaning of grills, oven, and kitchen, because if our store looks pretty,

then

Linking Words

definitely customers will come as well as they buy a different kind of chicken and vegetarian food.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, food certification training is required, which is beneficial for me to work anywhere. I

also

Linking Words

need afternoon shift training because some

time

Use synonyms

store was busy, and employees were not stocking everything. So, if I have

time

Use synonyms

at night

time

Use synonyms

then

Linking Words

I will do it. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Gurjeet

Submitted by varinder on Tue Sep 01 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

242 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

6
band
These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. Do advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?
In today’s complex world, numerous issues and topics are subject to debate. One such topic is working doing multiple jobs and switching careers several times. While every topic has advantages and disadvantages, the benefits of the topic outweigh the drawbacks. This essay will explore various advantages of doing multiple jobs and demonstrate why they hold greater significance compared to the disadvantages.
6.5
band
Task 2: Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?
Some believe that staying healthy is so crucial that medical services should be accessible to all, therefore e commercial entities should not operate this service. Although private health can provide high-quality service, this advantage is outweighed by its drawbacks to inequality and profitable treatments.
4.5
band
89.The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The maps below compare the current layout of a public park and when it was opened in 1920.
7
band
4.The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extend do you agree and disagree.
We currently rely on fossil fuels to provide the energy that allows our economy to continue to grow and people to thrive. This essay also agrees with this initiative because it’s a safer alternative to carbon-based energy and greener engineers are needed to develop it.
6
band
Some people spend hours every day on their smart phones
In this contemporary world , young generations are glued to their mobile phones , spending the majority of their time each day. It has both benefits as well as drawbacks. This essay will discuss why this might be the cause and how this problem can be alleviated .

You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting. In your letter, you should tell: * what you have done for the company in the year you worked there * what changes you would like to recommend * what training you require

These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. Do advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

Task 2: Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?

89.The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

4.The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extend do you agree and disagree.

Some people spend hours every day on their smart phones