Recently, you went for shopping at a famous mall. When you returned, you realised that you had been charged for items you did not actually buy. Write a letter to the authority in-charge explaining what has happened. In your letter, ● describe the situation ● explain the items you have bought and their cost ● tell him how you feel about the error and ask him to do something about it

Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to ask a favour about

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purchased from a famous mall. When I returned, I realised that I had been charged for

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did not actually buy.

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shopping at a famous mall with my family members. The

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which I bought were some clothes which cost $2000. Not only

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rate, but it

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of good quality.

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, I feel dissatisfaction about the error for

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which were not bought by me.

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, I will request you to do something about it and return my excess amount.

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good feedback about the mall and the

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the current situation has proven problematic, the proposed solution may lead to improved outcomes. I would appreciate it if you could look into

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matter at your earliest convenience. Please let me know if any

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details are required. Yours faithfully, Adam

nazianoor1314

Jul 4, 2025

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Coherence and Cohesion

Make sure to clearly explain each point in separate paragraphs.

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Check your grammar and spelling to improve clarity.

Task Response

Use formal language consistently throughout the letter.

Task Achievement

You have addressed the issue and asked for a solution.

Coherence and Cohesion

You included a polite closing which is important in formal letters.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

164 words

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