Some people believe arts such as painting and music cannot directly improve the quality of people's lives so that government money should be spent on other things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

India is a diverse

country

and fine arts and music has been part of cultures from the ancient time. Few of masses believe that

such

creativity and talent could not enhance the standard of living of people.

However

, they think that

such

money should be given to several other areas. I totally

agrees

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agree

with

this

notion,

this

is not

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a

the

perfect area to be focused there are quite

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a

few other

such

as education and healthcare.

To begin

with, From

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the

past couple of decades globalisation emerging rapidly,

as a result

, people need to all basic amenities to survive in

this

competitive world. To spending monetary finance on some cultural aspects

such

as arts and music would not be rational,

instead

administration should provide assistant in

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education and healthcare, which as most vital aspects for improving

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the

standard of public as well as

economy

.

For instance

, healthy and educated people could be given a proper contribution to the development of the

economy

, which is far away for ill and unhealthy masses.

On the other hand

, It is

also

significant to preserve

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traditional and cultural aspects which represent the

country

, that how it was in past and how development took place. Apart from

this

, Through maintaining historical things

such

as painting and traditional culture things,

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the

country could earn

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money through visitors around the

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world

, as people always love to explore things that have some ancient story. To illustrate

this

, a painting od Picasso was visited by millions of tourist around

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every corner of the world due to its story behind the sketch, Despite

this

, it was sold in about

million

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millions

of dollars, which make

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the

economy to earning huge amount from

such

cultural things. To conclude

this

, it is good to preserve old music and paint and spend

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huge money to preserve them.

However

, I agree with that,

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the

country should spend more on basic amenities

such

as education and healthcare facilities, as it directly contributes to the

economy

and enhances the standard of life.