Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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orld is changing a lot. Due to
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people are living
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ery hectic life.
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people have a different concept about the bad situation and I personally believe that we must have to work hard to change our bad
time
. In the following paragraphs, I have some strong arguments to support my view. To commence with, people still think that
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to compromise with
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nsatisfactory phase of our life. They are
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that because of the lake
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awareness
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effort. Mainly, they don't like to work hard so they always demotivate everyone and
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support illiteracy. Apart from
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, some educated human
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positive nature. They always prefer in
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hard work
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instead
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ad situation. Due to
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they can automatically motivate themself. In 2016 one government report shows that
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world's
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people always prefer to try something for the
next
level situation. Even if
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overnment encourage everyone to fight against bad
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ext generation will be motivated themself easily. To
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conclude
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success
and good
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after
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bad
time
. So always try to do something to change our difficult
time
. Because it is beneficial for the society as well as for the country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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