The use of mobile phones in public areas is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places, so  mobile phones should be banned in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Mobile phones have become an intrinsic part of human lives and now, it is hard to live without it; it has made lives extremely easy. People concur on the opinion that just like smoking, cell phones should be prohibited in certain places. I partially agree with
notion and the reasons for
are discussed in the following paragraphs. To commence with, electronic gizmos like mobiles have proven to be a boon for mankind. Multiple tasks
as paying electric and water bills et cetera can be completed in a couple of seconds without going anywhere.
, forbidding mobile phones in public spots could have some detrimental effects and can put a pause on their work. A questionnaire survey was conducted recently by a renowned company regarding
topic. It was surprising to know that every 9 out of 10 people were against
notion. On
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ontrary, in some places with high congestion, the cell phones should be prohibited as it will halt the number of accidents to some certain extent. Nowadays, everyone is so engaged in their electric devices that they do not pay attention even while crossing the roads.
has resulted in severe accidents.
, forbidding it would definitely be a step in the right direction.
For instance
, some nations across the globe have Have banned the uses of electric devices in public areas and the results are astounding. The rates of accidents have fallen to half. To conclude, the government, after a clear consideration of every
aspect should take the decision. In areas of high traffic
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the use of cell phones should be prohibited to save human lives.
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