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Some people think that a good diet and exercise are not necessary for a healthy and long life .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #diet #exercise #life
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 Olive Oil manufacturing steps. Overall, after picking up olive from tress, it goes through 7 different processes and
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insing process with cold water.
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, olive stones are getting separated from
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live paste. Moving on, the olive paste is kept in bags with holes and
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ressing process. After
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, separating process is performed and olive oil and water gets separated. After all the processes, the oil becomes ready to store and
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