Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. Why is this happening? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

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, at the present

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, family members become

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from each other and some people consider these changes as

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cause the globalization of the modern world. The majority of people decide to move to another city or even country due to the opportunity for getting

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etter education or job offer. I strongly believe that it can bring more difficulties in people`s

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of all, as far people from their families are as less support and love they feel.

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assumption can be supported by the fact that it is really complicated to maintain

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trong tie and relationship through distance communication. Audio and video calls have no ability to replace the live conversation, it is impossible to feel real emotions through the screen.

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slots for Skype or Zoom calls and make people

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communicate with their relatives just by messengers.

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why, all of mentioned above can become a reason

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growing loneliness sense, which is unreal to call as the positive aspect of

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, the probability of forgetting traditions, ancestors and the past at large is significantly increased when people spend few

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with their parents and siblings.

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erson can decide not to take a part in

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ommon celebration of holidays like Christmas or Easter and other important events, or maybe he/she has to miss it due to the tight timetable. As a consequence, traditions and relationship are steadily ruined by the

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and once these crucial things can disappear on the whole.

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process has a negative impact on the well-being of humanity at large. To sum up, the shortage of communication with family and habits to live not close to it make some people

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percept themselves lonely and to forget their origin.

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the modern trend of losing connections with relatives bring more problems than benefits.