Many people say that we have developed in to a “throw-away society” because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To want do you degree do you agree with this opinion?

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society since they discharging

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of plastic and rubbish into the surrounding which they cannot handle

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. On the one hand, nowaday companies produce a huge proportion of plastic bag,

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is because most of people adoption it to package the commodities to trade since they are

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and inexpensive. So people consume a tone of plastic into the environment every year.

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to everyone favourite,

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lead to make

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huge damage on

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nvironment and create a waste habit.

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, the medical mask is the trending right now due to the pandemic. After using it in one day, millions of mask are everywhere in the street, the city

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tourism but

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the economic,

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people are fill up trash everyday and create the method and project to protect the environment. But it will be hard if the company do not listen and continuous throwing the bad liquid into the surrounding. Companies only focus on the profit and do not have the awareness of their responsibilities.

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, they directly throw trash or raw waste

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the rivers, lakes.

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the water life but

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human.

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, according to news, The Formosa factory had been released the poisonous chemical out of the rive in the middle of VietNam. The result was that

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illion fishes

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, the inhabitant lost the major income. In conclusion,

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deem myself to agree that the people are tending to live in

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society due to the chemical in the river and

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are around the city. If

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problem cannot solve soon.,

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trend is likely to bring the

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on human's life and the Earth