At this present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,

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opulation of teenagers are increasing in some countries and its quantity is much more than

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lderly. I think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In

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essay, I will discuss the benefits of the growth of young people.

Teenages

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Teenagers

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have a superiority of their

phycicality

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physicality

. They are full of energy to have a challenge rather than older people.

For example

, a

work

environment is changing so fast day by day, so being a

staff

must always to have a challenge and new ideas to deal with some situations.

Thus

, youth are more likely to make it better rather than

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older people.

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of teens can well develop the economy of the country.

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, in the wake of

technology

advantcing

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advancing

dancing

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in a

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is

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is also followed

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also

follow the new

technology

.

For instance

,

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staff

may be asked to learn a new machine or software.

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, youth are learning faster because

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they always follow with updated

technology

.

Consequently

, they can

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the advantage of

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esired result.

On the other hand

, people who

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with older people

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also

have benefits. The best example is they have many

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in the

work place

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, so they

are fully understand

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the

work flow

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and having the

knowledege

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knowledge

in their specific field. If teenagers have any issue with working the process suddenly, the old

staff

who is experienced can help them

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their knowledge.

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older

staff

, it will cause some trouble. In conclusion,

although

older people have

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xperience that can deal with different situations.

However

, I strongly believe that the advantages of the youth's growth

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more than the elderly.

This

is because teenagers are full of energy to take the challenge and they follow the updated

technology

which can help

they

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to achieve the

work

.